SHdude: Protector of earth

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SHdude: Protector of earth

Post by SHdude on Fri May 08, 2009 11:16 am

Based on my manga character that I drew 30 minutes before writing:

Chapter 1:
Shane (alias SHdude) looked around, the dimly lit street was deserted except from two black cats fighting over a scrap of bone. The breeze blew back Shane's blond hair, creating an impressive sweeper fringe. There was a sound like footsteps and Shane whipped round... Two girls, hardly younger than Shane but wielding katanas, edged forwards. "The dark lord orders that you come," said the shortest one, who had ginger hair down to her shoulders. Of course! The dark lord loved his cats, thats why he had seen those cats... They were spying on him! "Then tell your "dark lord" to buzz off and leave me alone!" Shane yelled, getting irritable.

The ginger one whipped her katana out of it's sheath, shane would have to fight... "No!" yelled the taller of the girls. "The dark lord said not to chop SHdude to pieces!" Too late, the other girl had leapt forwards, yelling stuff like: "I hate you!"," OOH! That dark lord is handsome!" Shane put his left leg out in an impressive kicking motion. He didn't kick the girl, instead she flew straight into his foot, getting the wind knocked ot of her. Shane dived down and grabbed her katana and sheath, a little bit of blood but nothing he couldn't sort out! He swung the sheath onto his back. There was a loud crack and Shane vanished in a puff of black smoke...

Chapter 2:
Crack. Shane found himself in a large green meadow. Shane spotted a large black plane; the ultra-jet! He pounded the door with all his strength yelling: “Let me in! I have news!” The door was opened by a girl with big blue eyes and brunette hair going down to her shoulders (her name was Amy). “Hi Shane!” She yelled excitedly. “So what have you found out?” “Not much,” replied Shane. “I just got attacked by two of the dark lord’s “dark warriors” and that made me conclude that the dark lord is rising to power like he did ten years ago.” There was a long, awkward silence which was broken by a boy with Electric-blue hair. “You mean,” he said. “That the most evil person on earth is not in hiding as we originally thought?” “Yes Sam, that is what I mean,” replied Shane.

Sam, who had just noticed Shane’s new sword, said, “That is one Katana!” He pulled out his own Electrified sword and held it in his hands. “Sam, just because you’re jealous, doesn’t mean you have to use your electric powers on your sword to impress me!” Shane remarked. “Let’s have a duel then!” yelled Sam. Shane pulled out his sword. Too late, Sam’s sword ploughed through his ribcage… Then it all went black…

“SAM!” yelled Amy angrily. Shane got up. “What happened?” he asked. “Sam almost killed you with his sword. And now… He’s run off. So much for the chosen one, eh?” Amy replied. Suddenly, a shock hit him. “This all makes sense… Sam disappearing, Sam giving us all horrid looks. He tried to kill me… I think he’s becoming a dark warrior!” The effect was instant, Amy clapped her hands to her mouth and Alice fainted. “I’m going to Mount Vesuvius, home of the dark lord to prove my theory,” Shane said, a Blue flame dancing in his eyes. “I’m coming too!” yelled Amy and Alice (Alice had woken up!) There was a loud crack and Shane, Amy and Alice vanished in a cloud of black smoke…

Crack! Shane looked around… millions of dark warriors were whipping the dark lord’s slaves to get them to obey his orders. Shane leapt through a large portal in the ground. He found out that he was in the dark lord’s throne room. “SHdude!” yelled a booming voice. SHdude turned round, he saw the dark lord standing right in front of him! “DIE!!!” yelled Sam, appearing in front of the dark lord with his sword held upright. “NOOO!” yelled the dark lord angrily, although a hint of fear showed up in his voice. There was a loud clanging noise, and then the dark lord sagged to the ground, dead. “Sorry about earlier… But can I come back Sha-SHdude?” Sam asked hopefully. Shane smiled… “No,” He said finally, the smile faded off his face. “But, why not?” Sam enquired. “You tried to kill me and tried to become a dark warrior. I think it is certainly a no,” Shane replied, kicking Sam in the stomach. Sam toppled into a hole full of lava. “You were the chosen one! But you aren’t anymore! I am now classed as the chosen one!” Shane yelled, over the screams of his childhood friend as he died in the lava…

Chapter 3 coming soon!
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Re: SHdude: Protector of earth

Post by Mayu on Mon May 11, 2009 6:05 am

wow, this reminds me of my two friends who loved to write stories, but today.. i think they had just given up Sad
Please write some more.

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Re: SHdude: Protector of earth

Post by SHdude on Mon May 11, 2009 8:37 am

Mayu wrote:wow, this reminds me of my two friends who loved to write stories, but today.. i think they had just given up Sad
Please write some more.


I will don't worry! Wink

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